#17.06 questionnaire

I've got 89 points. Last time I earned 60 and I see clear progress in my speaking skills.
I've got more sensitive approach to the planning of speech, finding arguments and I learned about attention getters.
I even rewrote my speech to convey the new information to the audience.
This course helped me pay attention to important things and I learned to analyze my speech and the performances of others.

Thank you for an interesting course!

#17.06 THE LAST CHALLENGE

' Criticism may not be agreeable, but it is necessary, it fulfills the same function as pain in the human body. It calls attention to an unhealthy state of things. '

Winston Churchill
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When we do hobbies we often do it for our own pleasure. And we forget about our growth. I'll tell you honestly, I find it hard to accept criticism. I write small literary texts that have not been subjected to harsh criticism before. Many of people said that they are very beautiful. Last year I met a person who became a good friend for me and we often talk about criticism.  We have one hobby and I often turn to this girl for advice because she is several levels above me.

At once my friend told me that she was exchanging reviews for literary texts in one of the groups in the internet. She showed the reviews that were given to her creative work. These reviews contained both positive and negative comments. But I didn't think I would have asked for criticism of my texts.

But I made up my mind.This was a new and difficult step in my creative path. We exchanged feedback with a stranger. It was hard for me because I heard an honest opinion about my work. I realized that despite my virtues I had flaws. I was told that I have a superficial style and this was the most painful comment because I don't like to do a lot of descriptions.

But in the end I accepted this comment and concluded for myself that I would repeat my experience more than once to get out of my comfort zone. 
In conclusion I want to tell you not to be afraid to hear feedback from your work. You will become stronger.

#10.06 #3/4_Speech Peer Review Form

My speech:

Choose your social circle

We live in a dangerous time. The biggest threat to us is... People. Each of you may have encountered a toxic person. He drowns you in a swamp of poison, pointing out your flaws and laughing every time. And these people are closer than you think.  I had friends who said: "English? You learn Russian at first!", "Oh. Forty-seventh the size of the clothes. You're lucky", "Don't be so emotional", "What problems can you have?". They have committed the most terrible crime.They didn't care about my feelings. I want to tell you who toxic people are, how to recognize them, and how to protect yourself from them.

   Toxic people are very closely related to the word "abuse". The term "abusive relationships" is used by many clinical psychologists and scientists, including Julia Platonova. Abusive relationships are relationships where the partner violates the personal boundaries of another person. And this partner is called an abuser.
 They can be your friend, boyfriend, girlfriend or even a relative. These are people who continuously subject to emotional or physical violence those they know personally. Do you think it won't affect you? But sooner or later we meet such people. And we understand the truth only when we are strongly attached to a person.

       But how do you know that there is such a person next to you?

What I'm about to tell you may sound completely mundane but there is a danger in these points.

At first this person does not respect you and your opinion. In conversation with you, the person allows himself to use sarcasm and rudeness. It is an alarming signal.If you notice this behavior he says that you are exaggerating. But be careful. Disrespect can also be expressed in the form of idealization.

Then this is total control. It is very nice when a person says that they want to be near you often. At first he tell you not to wear bright makeup and then forbids you to communicate with your friends. But you have your personal boundaries.
A third point is a strong jealosy. Do you like being jealous? And when your partner, friend, or parent is very angry at you and your loved ones for communicating with them? Do you feel the difference?Such jealousy is not an indicator of love.
And the most interesting moment for you.It's never his fault. If this person is always looking for someone to blame when problems arise and doesn't want to admit his guilt you can see who is standing in front of you.
Now that we've gotten to know the toxic people better let's put on some solid armor.
First of all, don't let this person do this to you. Don't limit your social circle to just one abuser. Don't expect him to keep his promises and don't let him stop you from doing what you want.
And the last step is to break off the relationship or keep the person at a distance.
Today we talked in detail about who abusers are and how to behave with them. And my dear friends. I appeal to you. Do not tolerate this relation and even if you love this person very much break this relation as soon as possible. Any of your emotional experiences affect your physical condition and it can lead you to death. Even if it is the husband of your children or your wife with whom you have been in a relationship for a long time. You will save not only your life but also the lives of your children.Remember that it all starts with small and it is very important to be selective about your social circle.

- I shortened the second part of the body and added a reliable source. If you have any questions or doubts, please contact me.  I'll be pleased to have your assistance.

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Speech Peer Review Form

p.85

1. What is the main idea of this speech?

The main idea of speech is to avoid abusive relationships and carefully watching a social circle. 

2. Who is the intended audience? Is the tone appropriate for that audience?

The intended audience is young people aged 22 and my professor. I'm afraid the tone is too informal.

3. Does the speech begin with any attention-getter?

Yes. It starts with attention-getter (personal story)

4. Is there a clearly formulated thesis? How could the thesis be improved?

I think that the thesis is clearly formulated. But there are not enough examples or facts.

5. Does the introduction contain an easy-to-follow preview?

The introduction contains an easy-to-follow preview.

6. Does the whole introduction in this speech support the thesis? If not, what information needs to he removed?

I think the thesis supports the information given in the introduction.

7. What kinds of information are given in support of the thesis (examples, facts, description, reasons)?

Examples are given to support the thesis.

8. Is enough detailed information given to adequately support the thesis? What additional information is needed?

The information is provided in sufficient detail.

9. Are there any linking elements that make the speech coherent and clear?

Yes. There are some linking elements.

10. Is there any part of the paragraph that is unclear or that you do not understand? If so, what needs more or clearer explanation?

It seems to me that all information is provided clearly.

11. Do you see any errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling or word choice? If so, note them down here?

I didn't notice any errors in grammar or punctuation, or any lexical errors.

12. What part of this speech do you like the most?

I really like the second part of the body because it reveals the essence of abusive partners and hidden dangers.

#10.06 #2_sources

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PART 1
I think you should know about this fantastic site. It's called
https://www.myspeechclass.com/.

1. Many of us are lost when it comes to choosing a topic for our speech. On this site you can find specific directions and problematic issues that are currently relevant. The design is very convenient. You click on the topic you need (for example, funny and humorous speech topics) and then the site opens a list of topics. Their number reaches two hundred and you will definitely be able to find something for your taste.

2. Also on the site there are examples of various outlines and tips that can help you when writing a speech.

3. And not only them. You can ask for an opinion about your speech online or order speech writing from a specialist for a fee. But I still advise you to write your own speech so that you can practice more.

As for the practice of public speaking - you can do this during broadcasts on YouTube, on Tiktok or on vk.com because I unfortunately did not find separate platforms for this.

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PART 2
I want to share with you a great video for practicing public speech on the YouTube channel StageMilk:
https://youtu.be/8sQoYa8TptI It's called "Articulation exercises for Actors (How to Improve Articulation & Diction)
Do you know why should you watch it?

At first, at the very beginning while watching the video you will find some new tongue twisters that will help you improve your skills.

Secondly, the man shares with us tips and it is clear that he understands this topic. It may be  pleasant to listen to him, because he is very energetic and moderately emotional.

Thirdly, the most interesting technique is the musical practice of our scales, I think that you will definitely like it.  What is it? Watch the video and you will find out!

In conclusion I want to say that this video contains a lot of useful exercises that will improve your articulation and diction. You will not waste your time.

#10.06 #1_challenge

* Voice your favorite character from the movie/cartoon and post it on the social network.

When I first noticed this short video I was very surprised, because no one has ever tried to voice this new character from the cartoon "Miraculous Ladybug". In the description, it was said that this is the author's first experience in voicing characters. The video seemed interesting to me and I decided to watch it.
I liked that the voice was clearly made under the movement of the lips and the author edited the video without time delays. I would also like to note smooth inflections of intonation, without its sharp jumps. It is noticeable that the person worked for a long time, all the words were pronounced clearly.
But it seems to me that the voice was a bit inappropriate for this character. This is my personal opinion.
I wish the author development and of course advised in the comments to work on the voice ranges. Who knows, maybe she will do it even better in the future?

#3. 06 HOMETASK

  1) CHALLENGE

How much time do you spend with your relatives? Do you know all about them? And do you call your aunts and uncles often?
   My family is very large. I have three aunts and one uncle. We used to live a few doors away from each other. We hardly see each other now.
    For me family means a lot and I have long wanted to communicate closely with relatives but I was afraid or did not find the time. During the coronavirus period many people stay at home like my aunts and uncle and I thought this was a great chance to contact them.
  First, I called my aunt Vika and tried to find common topics with her. It turned out that we have something to talk about. In our spare time, we discussed interesting articles on psychology and travel with her.
    I also establish a relationship with my other aunt and often sit with her daughter.
It was hard for me because my parents don't get along with relatives and for this reason we try not to talk. I was afraid that we would not establish relations, but it turned out that my relatives want to communicate with me and I even help my aunt in learning English.
 In the future I want to organize a joint holiday because it's been so long since we had a family holiday together with our grandparents. I have told you my story of family rapprochement and I want you to remember that there is nothing more precious than family. Communicate with your relatives while you can.
 
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2) P.105 - 111
Analysis of the speech

I chose the first speech for analysis.

There is an attention getter in the form of a question: "Have you ever been to London?"

The link "If you have..." is present. I see a good introduction.

Here there is a statement and then goes its explanation, the person tells us what the London eye is.

Unfortunately, the speech preview was skipped.

The first part of the body lacks specifics and details. I would add, in what specific films and broadcasts this information was mentioned. This would give the speaker more credibility.

I can't follow the logic of the story. If we see how the introduction moves smoothly to the body, then I don't see a connection between the two parts of the body. First we talk about one thing, and then abruptly and without a smooth transition about the other.

I liked that there is a conclusion here. A person briefly talks about what the sights are, sums it up and designates it with a specific cliche. But it would be better if he briefly listed what he said above and mentioned concrete attractions.

3) The last speech was mine and I will write a full analysis of it later.

4) It is a pity that the course of social psychology has ended. I learned a lot of new and interesting things.